8Fold: My Father's Son #1
saxonbrenton at hotmail.com
Sun Jun 13 19:32:26 PDT 2010
On Sunday 13 June 2010 Andrew [pwerdna at gmail.com] wrote:
> On Sat, 12 Jun 2010 22:53:43 +0000 (UTC), Saxon Brenton wrote:
>> My Father's Son #1
>> An Eightfold series
> Well, I don't think anyone will accuse you of ripping off any
> Avengers-training series. Indeed, it reminds me more of the various
> X-Men-training series, but there's a genre that it evokes even more that
> I'll save for a longer review.
> Overall, interesting concept, mildly clunky infodump-y execution.
Heh. Unfortunately clunky infodump-y execution is the main flaw of my
writing style. Always has been. Although 'mildly' does give me hope that
it's getting better.
(And somewhere in New Zealand Jamas is no doubt saying "I've been
telling him to stop writing doctral theses disguised as stories for years.")
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