StarFall: Spellbinder #1: "Take This Job and Shove It"

Andrew Perron pwerdna at
Fri Dec 17 09:36:10 PST 2010

On Dec 16, 11:55 pm, William Strickland
<indomitable.will... at> wrote:

> > I gather your character has history, because she comes from a
> > superhero campaign. I admire how you skipped most of the history in
> > this story (- though I sometimes got confused by what was flashback
> > and what wasn't.
> I'm going to need to come up with a way to relate that here, in the
> plain text format. I'd originally written the story in html, and the
> flashback segments were all in italics.

It seemed fairly clear to me (the shift between third and first was
certainly helpful there).  Perhaps, as a hint, you could use different
scene-separation borders?

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, hm.

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