LNH/Contest: Legion of Net.Heroes Volume 2 #35 HCC8

[Andrew Perron]

On Mon, 26 Apr 2010 21:47:09 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:

> On Apr 26, 6:07 am, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:

>> I thought it needed a bit more conflict; as it is, the first plan they come
>> up with works just fine.
> 
> Yeah, there was that too.  I can't claim any superiority in
> suspenseful conflict-writing, though.  Usually Andrew has to prompt
> me, "I thought it needed a bit more conflict..."

It's weird, too, because I'd expect to be the one on the side of increasing
character interaction and the like.  Instead, I'm all "More arguing and
hitting things, please!"

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, just goes to show.