LNH/Contest: Legion of Net.Heroes Volume 2 #35 HCC8

[Scott Eiler]

On Apr 26, 6:07 am, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
> On Sun, 25 Apr 2010 07:46:06 +0000 (UTC), Saxon Brenton wrote:
> > Authors notes:
> >      Written for the 8th High Concept challenge: Opposites.
>
> Just under the wire! (Well, Tom's was even juster.)
>
> >      Kind of unfocused as a story.
>
> I thought it needed a bit more conflict; as it is, the first plan they come
> up with works just fine.

Yeah, there was that too.  I can't claim any superiority in
suspenseful conflict-writing, though.  Usually Andrew has to prompt
me, "I thought it needed a bit more conflict..."