LNH/Contest: Legion of Net.Heroes Volume 2 #35 HCC8
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Mon Apr 26 14:47:09 PDT 2010
On Apr 26, 6:07 am, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
> On Sun, 25 Apr 2010 07:46:06 +0000 (UTC), Saxon Brenton wrote:
> > Authors notes:
> > Written for the 8th High Concept challenge: Opposites.
> Just under the wire! (Well, Tom's was even juster.)
> > Kind of unfocused as a story.
> I thought it needed a bit more conflict; as it is, the first plan they come
> up with works just fine.
Yeah, there was that too. I can't claim any superiority in
suspenseful conflict-writing, though. Usually Andrew has to prompt
me, "I thought it needed a bit more conflict..."
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