SW10, CONTEST: The Opposites (High Concept #8)

Andrew Perron pwerdna at gmail.com
Thu Apr 15 00:48:18 PDT 2010

On Thu, 15 Apr 2010 03:54:20 +0000 (UTC), Scott Eiler wrote:

> On Apr 14, 1:36 pm, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
>> Interesting.  It seemed more like an explanation of the premise of a story
>> than a story itself.
> Aww.  I know the confrontation against Darkness went quickly, but I
> was trying to make a point that darkness is not always epic, and it
> should be easy to stand against it if you do it right.

I can see what you were going for... but it reads like you forgot to put
that part in.

> Thanks.  I made this story heavy in dialog, just for practice, so odds
> were I'd get one good line in.

The dialogue was of a very well-done style. ^-^

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, man, that sentence is twisted.  Time
for bed...

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