SW10, CONTEST: The Opposites (High Concept #8)

Scott Eiler seiler at eilertech.com
Wed Apr 14 20:54:20 PDT 2010

On Apr 14, 1:36 pm, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
> Interesting.  It seemed more like an explanation of the premise of a story
> than a story itself.

Aww.  I know the confrontation against Darkness went quickly, but I
was trying to make a point that darkness is not always epic, and it
should be easy to stand against it if you do it right.

> There was one really good line, though:
> > "Oh, I see. I admire the interplay of the different colored tiles and
> > the devotion the architects obviously had, so I hope you don't mind if
> > I express my appreciation in my own unique manner and SHOOT THE
> > MOTHER&^@%ER UP!"

Thanks.  I made this story heavy in dialog, just for practice, so odds
were I'd get one good line in.

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