[REVIEW] The Tribulations of Kid Review #1

[Andrew Perron]

On Mon, 2 Mar 2009 03:21:00 +0000 (UTC), Tom Russell
<milos_parker at yahoo.com> wrote:

>On Mar 1, 8:33Â pm, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
>> On Sun, 1 Mar 2009 20:38:11 +0000 (UTC), Tom Russell

>> Usually, it does. Â There's been a couple clunkers, but it's mostly
>> solid.
>
>Could you give me some clunkerific examples?  While it's nice to hear
>about the things I do right, it's my weakpoints that I need to work
>on.

You know, I've been trying to think of one all day, but I'm not coming
up with anything.  I'll tell you if I run into any reading the rest of
the series.

>> I just wish I knew how you did it. @-@
>
>Lots and lots of rewriting.  I've been working on JOLT CITY # 18
>since, oh, # 17 came out.

Hmmmmmmm.  Hm.

Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, hm.