[REVIEW] The Tribulations of Kid Review #1

[Tom Russell]

On Mar 1, 8:33Â pm, Andrew Perron <pwer... at gmail.com> wrote:
> On Sun, 1 Mar 2009 20:38:11 +0000 (UTC), Tom Russell

> >One thing I love about the superhero genre is its ability to transform
> >the potentially ridiculous into the sublime. Â Whether I achieved that
> >or not is, of course, for the reader to decide, but I will definitely
> >say that it is my ambition to do just that.
>
> Usually, it does. Â There's been a couple clunkers, but it's mostly
> solid.

Could you give me some clunkerific examples?  While it's nice to hear
about the things I do right, it's my weakpoints that I need to work
on.

> >> but it doesn't matter, because all you need to start
> >> out with is in the opening story.
>
> >And that's just about the best compliment you can pay me, right
> >there. :-)
>
> I just wish I knew how you did it. @-@

Lots and lots of rewriting.  I've been working on JOLT CITY # 18
since, oh, # 17 came out.

=Tom