[Contest][Misc] High Concept Challenge #1: The Forgotten Man
Saxon Brenton
saxonbrenton at hotmail.com
Fri Jul 3 04:59:55 PDT 2009
[Contest][Misc] High Concept Challenge #1: The Forgotten Man
Aaaannnd desperately sliding in for a late minute posting of another story:
High Concept Challenge #1: The Forgotten Man
Written and copyright 2009 by Saxon Brenton
Time seemed to always be at a premium these days. That was why the
Forgotten Man was currently so pragmatic in dealing with the underlings,
thugs and gun-toting gang members of the City's mobs. Time was when he'd
have enjoyed a good rough house with these low level scum, laying them
out with haymakers to the jaw, all the while taunting them with appalling
puns. Now he saw them as nothing more than obstacles to his goal, and he
killed them with utilitarian efficiency.
He was ruthless but above all he was quick. By the ache in his bones
he could tell he did not have much time left, but he nevertheless glanced
reflexively at his pocket watch and grimaced. There was only three
minutes left until the Forgetting Hour.
No indeed, he did not have much time left.
The masked vigilante stepped across the bodies and jogged to the
stairwell, reloading his guns as he went. He paused for only a brief half
second to listen for any further gangsters, and then ascended the stairs.
Somewhere above him was the mob boss Al D'lambert. Tonight's target.
As he made his way upstairs the Forgotten Man felt anger. Anger at
D'lambert. Anger at the criminal underworld in general. Anger at himself
for the carelessness of lapsing back to the habits of hero and public icon
rather than the more vital task of relentless avenger. He wouldn't be
running late if he hadn't stopped to bust up that standover attempt that
he'd stumbled across at the jewellery store in Bay Street.
Consequences. Always consequences. More than you could ever hope
to deal with. The Forgotten Man had deliberately gone and kicked over the
anthill of underworld crime in the City in the full expectation that it
would throw the insects into turmoil. And, yes, that meant that the
increase in mob related crime and spill over from their gang wars as they
jostled for advantage was not only the Forgotten Man's fault but also his
responsibility.
But there responsibility and there was responsibility, and they were
as different as day and night. Better to crush the insects that ruled
the nest and thereby put an end to the entire infestation, than to try
ineffectually to stop every robbery, thwart every standover attempt, and
protect every innocent. He would have tried in the past. Back when he
was just a regular costumed hero. But now he had to focus on laying the
hoodoo of the Forgetting Hour on one other key person each and every day.
Two minutes to seven o'clock. Johnny Scarpezi stepped out onto the
landing. He was one of D'lambert's right-hand men, although that was
neither here nor there at the moment. He was just another obstacle, this
one with a tommy gun that burst forth a hail of fiery hot metal death
straight at the chest of the Forgotten Man.
As if *that* could make any difference in the concluding moments
before the Forgetting Hour.
The bullets bounced. The Forgotten Man would ache from the bruises
later this evening, after all of the built up energy of the Forgetting
Hour was released off in its one moment of chronosynclastic vengeance.
But for now the temporal buildup empowered him with escalating levels of
endurance, strength and speed. He leapt forward and disarmed Scarpezi
with one inhuman swipe of his hand, and before the man had time to react
grabbed his head and snapped his neck with equal economy of motion. He
left Scarpezi's corpse where it dropped, not even bothering to glance at
it. It was almost time! He could feel the imminence of the Forgetting
Hour. The imminence and the immanence. It lived! It breathed! It
thirsted for justice!
One minute to seven o'clock! The Forgotten Man reached a locked
door. D'lambert was hiding behind it. Perhaps he though it would protect
him. Fool! He had merely trapped himself. The vigilante broke through,
splintering the door in the process, to reach the rat who was cornered
within. He was met by another hail of gunfire. It did D'lambert no more
good than it had for Scarpezi.
As he grabbed D'lambert his hands were glowing again. In his mind he
could hear the tolling of the Forgetting Hour as the final seconds counted
down. It was almost seven o'clock, which meant that it was midnight some
three-and-a-half thousand miles to the east in Greenwich. The Forgotten
Man threw D'lambert prone onto a table, and then Bound him to that spot by
taking a study stake of hardwood timber and using it to nail the mobster's
stomach to the furniture top. D'lambert screamed, and yes, there was
blood. Good. Juris demanded no less. The Forgotten Man ignored both and
shoved his hands, now streaming with incandescent light, into D'lambert's
face. The dying gangster may be Bound physically, but now he would be
Bound temporally! Bound into a temporal cul-de-sac from which there would
no escape. The Forgetting Hour was upon them! Cosmic forces came into
alignment and fell into place with a reverberating shudder that made the
entire planet echo but which were simply too big for the workaday world notice.
The Forgotten Man sagged back, momentarily exhausted by the effort
of directing the power to a specific purpose. D'lambert was gone, and all
that remained to mark his passage was a bloody hole in the table where the
stake had been rammed home.
The Forgetting Hour had passed. No one who had seen or interacted
with the Forgotten Man in the past 24 hours would remember him. It was a
small price to pay. In fact, it was hardly a problem for an established
pulp hero who already had a hidden lair and habits of working in secret...
Although the Forgotten Man had sometimes speculated about the type of Hell
that a normal man or woman would experience if they had found themselves
in such a situation without his preparation. Why, such a thing could
drive a man mad!!!!!
Nor would anyone who had seen Al D'lambert remember him either. Not
only would he soon die of his mortal wound, but Bound as he was in the
single second of the stroke of seven o'clock, no one would ever remember
anything about him either. The surviving members of the gang he had led
would find themselves suddenly leaderless and seemingly always having been
leaderless. And being criminals, they would be too short sighted to wonder
about how such an improbable state of affairs had come about. Even after
all the recent newspaper articles by the more perceptive reporters in the
City had pointed out the phenomenon, the mob members would still be too
stupid to cotton on.
And in their stupidity and greed and territorial aggression they
would scheme and fight and die. And one by one the Forgotten Man would
pick off the new mob leaders, and start the cycle anew. In the end,
either directly or indirectly, he would destroy them all.
But not now. Now he had to rest. By the pre-dawn hours of tomorrow
morning enough of the power would have returned as the Forgetting Hour
approached again that the vigilante would be revitalised. Then he could
start his work again. However for now he was at low ebb, and had no one
else that he could pass his task on to. Not even to his former fellow
heroes. Even though many of the other costumed crusaders had experience
in the weird and unearthly to comprehend the situation, the limitation
of making them understand anew each and every day made the prospect
unworkable. No, this was his burden alone.
Such was the fate of the Forgotten Man.
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Author's notes:
Written for Tom's 'High Concept challenge'. This is a bit of a
dog's breakfast, since for some reason I started with an incongrous
image (from the first issue of _Girl Genius_: of criminals being placed
in giant glass jars to die in public of exposure/starvation/dehydration/
whatever, and then hammered the square peg of the Forgotten Man concept
into it.
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Saxon Brenton University of Technology, city library, Sydney Australia
saxon.brenton at uts.edu.au saxonbrenton at hotmail.com
"These 'no-nonsense' solutions of yours just don't hold water in a complex
world of jet-powered apes and time-travel." - Superman, JLA Classified #3
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