REVIEW: End of Month Reviews #71 - November 2009 [spoilers]
Andrew Perron
pwerdna at gmail.com
Thu Dec 10 13:07:42 PST 2009
On Dec 9, 8:36Â pm, Saxon Brenton <saxonbren... at hotmail.com> wrote:
> Coherent Super Stories #18
<snip>
> From a storytelling pint of view finding out... stuff... is Â
> important, because Jack is the (fictional) brother of the (real life) Â
> Robert Ripley of 'Ripley's Believe It Or Not' fame, and Jack uses his Â
> kit bashing abilities when he acts as an agent for his brother in searching Â
> out exotic titbits of information. Â This is a secondary character premise Â
> that I find rivals the contest premise as a point of interest.
Agreed! I could see Jack Ripley supporting a whole series.
> Honey-Love Bunny #1-4
<snip>
> Â Â Â Now, simply because the Honey-Love Bunny stories are different from Â
> pretty much anything else on RACC does not mean they are without merit. Â
Indeed! I'd like to see more weird experimental stuff like this.
> Or to put it another Â
> way, it looks as though Matthew decided to tell a variety of different Â
> styles of stories based on a particular character who would act as the Â
> unifying element. Â There's nothing wrong with this as a concept. Â I started Â
> out my _Limp-asparagus Lad_ series with that as one of the secondary Â
> considerations, and I nicked the notion from what Neil Gaiman is said to Â
> have planned for his _Sandman_.
> Â Â Â The problem is that while it's possible to tell a succession of Â
> stories in different styles, this in turn requires a continuing thread of Â
> something else - usually of plot that forms an overarching story arc - to Â
> draw the series together. Â I can't discern anything like that in this Â
> case. Â There doesn't even seem to be consistency in basic motivation for Â
> the lead character.
I disagree. It's not very defined, but there's a weird sense of
"innocent abroad"/"stranger in a strange land" that seems to define
Honey-Love Bunny.
> Just Imagine Saxon Brenton vs. Andrew Perron in the Return of the RACCies! #5 Â
> A Legion of Net.Heroes [LNH] chaotic add-on cascade
> by Andrew Perron
>
> Â Â Â Okay, so. Â Last issue Andrew *finally* managed to rope in a second Â
> writer, making this story a proper multi-writer cascade. Â
Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo!
> This issue the characters (Bluetooth, Manga Man Violet, and newly joined by the Red
> Herring) proceed to advance various plot threads. Â Part of this involves Â
> trying to get more people to represent the other colours of the spectrum Â
> (yes, it's turning - at least in part - into a Blackest Night parody/
> pastiche/what-have-you). Â For this they call upon the help of another of Â
> the Mangateers (aka the Power Manga), Manga Man Pink. Â Another plot thread Â
> is used when they meet up with the heroes who have been affected by the Â
> Legacy Beam (Hi-Fi Lorelai, formerly Kid Hyperdefinition; and Blasferatu, Â
> formerly Longinus). Â
Whom I've been having trouble actually fitting into the plot. Gleh.
> Other (extant) plot threads that are as yet untouched Â
> are regaining the Legacy Beam from the Interim Iconoclasts and figuring Â
> out the mystery of Just Imagine Saxon Brenton Presents the RACCies Again #6.
At least one of these will be resolved in the next issue!
> Â Â Â - pant pant pant -
> Â Â Â Now, the story itself manages to advance these various plot points, Â
> and even throw in a brief fight scene when Convoluted Origin Man shows up, Â
> after having been turned into a continuity zombie by the Hungry Past. Â
> However for the most part the story is exposition and characterisation. Â
This seems to be a trend for this series, due to the sheer volume of
retcons and explanation involved in tying three cascades into a single
coherent story. Also I like them.
> The Mangateers act like fanboys, and so there's a lot of banter involving Â
> references to manga, anime, role playing games and conventions. Â Meanwhile Â
> Bluetooth continues to struggle with his Darkening in amusing ways. Â And Â
> the Red Herring is still as insane as it was when it first appeared back Â
> in _F.I.S.H. Force_. Â
Whew. I was worried about correct characterization here.
> Completely silly but perfectly readable.
Yay! Thankee much!
> Legion of Net.Heroes Volume 2 #30
> 'The Articulated Man!'
> A Legion of Net.Heroes [LNH] series  {high concept 4 contest}
> by Andrew Perron
It's ME month!
> Â Â Â This is a great little comedy of errors. Â The story is a simple Â
> premise which is dealt with in a direct and uncomplicated way (and yes, Â
> I'm jealous, since my HCC4 entry collpased under its own weight in trying Â
> to deal with its premise).
This is mostly because I came up with the idea and wrote the story
over the course of about twelve hours. I don't think I've ever done
that before, and while I'd like to do it again sometime soon, I'm not
gonna try to force it.
> Superhuman World 2009: A Date with the Darkness Â
<snip>
> Â Â Â The thing is it feels as though it should be the opening chapter in Â
> a much longer story. Â For me this comes partly from the brevity of the Â
> plot, and mostly from the way Leon learns something but the reader doesn't Â
> find out what he *gets* from that information.
Yeah, I got that feeling too. It seemed like I was missing something.
> Â Â Â On the other hand, in all probability this post was simply something Â
> put together for the High Concept challenge without necessarily being part Â
> of something bigger other than a larger setting. Â In other words, perhaps Â
> it's not part of a larger story but simply a vignette showing part of a Â
> world. Â Supporting this view is that the author's notes tells us that the Â
> Bride of Ultimate Darkness is an established character in other stories Â
> written by Scott and available on his webpage, while Leon is new.
Ahhhhhh, interesting. I swear I'm going to get around to reading
those eventually.
> Â It's Â
> plausible that Leon is simply a to-be-only-briefly-used point of view Â
> character, focusing on his reaction to her unique situation. Â However, Â
> that in turn comes back to the need for the reader to find out what Â
> Leon's reaction *is* beyond the merely immediate and physical.
Indeed! Remember, every issue is someone's first!
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, semblance!
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