8FOLD/ACRA: Jolt City # 2, There Was a Crooked Man!

Martin Phipps martinphipps2 at yahoo.com
Tue Sep 12 09:32:07 PDT 2006

Tom Russell wrote:

>    "Hi," he says, admiring her long silken black hair
> and delicious chocolate complexion.  "I'm Martin R..."
> He's interrupted by the shrill alarum of his beeper.
> It's Danielle.  "Ah, I know this doesn't look good as
> a first impression, but I got to take this call.  My
> girlfriend.  Had a doctor's appointment."
>    "Feel free to use my phone," says the woman.  "I'll
> just go and freshen up," she adds, wiggling her hips
> as she sashays into an adjacent bathroom.
>    "Wow," says Martin under his breath.  "That's a
> whole lot of woman."

You know, I had spent most of the evening reading this story and was
about to go to bed.  (I'm a slow reader.)  But suddenly you had my
attention again.

Review to follow. :)


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