META: Writing Good Action [was: Re: [LNH/ACRA] Onion Lad #8]
Arthur Spitzer
arspitzer at earthlink.net
Wed Jun 7 21:06:41 PDT 2006
in article 1149738846.041169.185000 at h76g2000cwa.googlegroups.com,
martinphipps2 at yahoo.com at martinphipps2 at yahoo.com wrote on 6/7/06 8:54 PM:
> Tom Russell wrote:
>
>> I ask, not only on behalf of my fellow writers but also for myself
>> (action scenes never being my strong point), what makes for a good
>> prose action sequence?
>
> That's difficult. If it is a conversation you are describing then, of
> course, you just use dialogue. If it is a static scene then you can
> take your time to establish it, assuming that this is something the
> reader cares about. But for an action scene you don't want to use too
> much description because you don't have a lot of control over how the
> reader reads the story. Will the reader get up to go to the bathroom
> during the action scene?
I believe you should ideally try to write stories that are so compelling
that the reader would rather pee in (his/her) pants than get up to go to
the bathroom.
Arthur "Ideally" Spitzer
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