[NNTP] draft-ietf-nntpext-tls-nntp-03

[Ken Murchison]

Clive D.W. Feather wrote:

> (2) I suggested a change to the last sentence of the first paragraph of
> 2.2.2.1. I've just realized I was slightly wrong - there are other commands
> (notably LIST EXTENSIONS) for whice 483 is not permitted. So change:
> 
>     further NNTP commands from the client (other than a QUIT command)
> 
> to:
> 
>     further substantive NNTP commands from the client (note that the 483
>     response is forbidden for some commands such as QUIT)
> 
> Alternatively, delete the "(other than a QUIT command)" comment entirely,
> relying on [NNTP] to make the point.

How about "... further restricted NNTP commands from the client with a 
483 response code ...."


> You might also want to add a LIST EXTENSIONS to the last example to show
> this.

Actually, doesn't the use of GROUP local.public in the last example 
already illustrate this point?

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