[NNTP] Proposed STARTTLS changes

[Russ Allbery]

Ken Murchison <ken at oceana.com> writes:

> Sorry for replying to my own post again, but I also tweaked the 3
> examples:

> Example of a client being prompted to use encryption and negotiating it
> successfully (showing the removal of STARTTLS from the extensions list
> once a TLS layer is active), followed by a successful selection of the
> group and an (inappropriate) attempt by the client to initiate another
> TLS negotiation:

Sorry for the belated note, but yes, this and the new wording look fine to
me.

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Russ Allbery (rra at stanford.edu)             <http://www.eyrie.org/~eagle/>