[ietf-nntp] Draft21.pre-1.txt

[Charles Lindsey]

8.5.1.3+31
|  Example of the same command on a system that does not implemented
                                                         ^^^^^^^^^^^
							 implement
|  retrieval by message-id:


8.6.1.2+38
|  will still be in multi-line format). The line consists of the article 
|  number, a space, and then the contents of the header (without the 
|  header name or the colon and space that follow it) or metadata item. 

What if there are multiple spaces after the colon (or even a TAB)?

Perhaps "and any whitespace that follows it".

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