ietf-nntp Draft 20 pre-release 3

[Clive D.W. Feather]

Okay, I've taken all the wording changes I made in response to comments on
draft pre-2 and put up the result as pre-3. There's also a unidiff for
those who want to just see the highlights:

<http://www.davros.org/nntp-texts/draft20.pre-3.txt>
<http://www.davros.org/nntp-texts/draft20.pre-3.html>
<http://www.davros.org/nntp-texts/draft20.pre-2-3.DIFFS.txt>

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