ietf-nntp Draft 14 glitches

Clive D.W. Feather clive at demon.net
Tue Dec 4 01:17:23 PST 2001


Page 2, paragraph numbered "1" (last para on page): "repsonse" is a
misspelling.

9.2.2.1 Change "Article follows" to "Headers follow" (twice).
9.2.3.1 Change "Article follows" to "Body follows" (twice).
9.2.4.1 Change "Article follows" to "Article found" (twice).

9.3.1.1 and 9.3.2.1 Split the response codes into two sets: those
responding to the command and those responding to end-of-data.

9.4.X.1 and 9.5.X.X.1 should not list the 50X generic response codes.

11.4.1 delete "may be a" - the response is always multi-line.

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