ietf-nntp Section 9.4.1

[Stan O. Barber]

Tim Roberts wrote:
> 
> I purposed some suggestions in my first note.
> 
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "Stan O. Barber" <sob at verio.net>
> To: <ietf-nntp at academ.com>
> Sent: Wednesday, September 06, 2000 9:05 PM
> Subject: Re: ietf-nntp Section 9.4.1
> 
> > Do you have some specific suggestions on how to make it clearer?
> >

I guess that was not clear enough for me. Could you rephrase it as actual
paragraph replacements?