I purposed some suggestions in my first note. ----- Original Message ----- From: "Stan O. Barber" <sob at verio.net> To: <ietf-nntp at academ.com> Sent: Wednesday, September 06, 2000 9:05 PM Subject: Re: ietf-nntp Section 9.4.1 > Do you have some specific suggestions on how to make it clearer? >