ietf-nntp Re: Section 7 minor points

[Clive D.W. Feather]

me at Demon said:
> Firstly, the notation used in the examples for starting and ending a
> connection are inconsistent with each other; the former also looks like
> it's a message sent over the connection. Can I suggest that instead we use
> indented bracket text, thus:
[...]

> !         [Server closes connection]

should also be added to section 10.1.2 (QUIT example).

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