Review: Spheres of Influence, by Ryk E. Spoor

[Russ Allbery]

Spheres of Influence
by Ryk E. Spoor

Series:    Arenaverse #2
Publisher: Baen
Copyright: November 2013
ISBN:      1-4516-3937-6
Format:    Kindle
Pages:     576

Spheres of Influence is a direct sequel to Grand Central Arena, which
introduces the world background and is also a much better book. There
is a detailed recap of the previous volume (thank you!) and a summary
of things that happened between the volumes (that was odd), so it's
easy to refresh your memory, but there's no point in reading this book
if you've not read the first one.

In this series, Spoor is explicitly writing a throw-back space
adventure inspired by E.E. "Doc" Smith and similar SF from the 1920s to
the 1950s. Grand Central Arena was the discovery and exploration story,
which in my opinion is where that literary tradition is at its
strongest. Spheres of Influence veers into a different and less
appealing part of that tradition: the moment when the intrepid space
explorer is challenged by the ignorant Powers That Be at home, who
don't understand the importance of anything that's happening.

Captain Ariane Austin and her crew made a stunning debut into the
Arena, successfully navigated its politics (mostly via sheer audacity
and luck), and achieved a tentatively strong position for humanity.
However, humanity had never intended them to play that role. There
isn't much government in Spoor's (almost entirely unexplained)
anarcho-libertarian future, but there is enough for political
maneuvering and the appointment of a more official ambassador to the
Arena who isn't Ariane. But the Arena has its own rules that care
nothing about human politics, which gives Ariane substantial leverage
to try to prevent Earth politicians from making a mess of things.

This plot could be worse. Unlike his source material, Spoor is not
entirely invested in authoritarian politics, and the plot resolution is
a bit friendlier to government oversight than one might expect. (It's
disturbing, though, that this oversight seems to consist mostly of the
military, and it's not clear how those people are selected.) But the
tradition of investing vast powers in single people of great moral
character is one of the less defensible tropes of early American SF,
and Spoor chooses to embrace it to an unfortunate degree. Clearing out
all the bureaucratic second-guessing to let the honorable person who
has stumbled across vast power make all the decisions is a type of
simplistic politics with a long, bad history in US fiction. The author
can make it look like a good idea by yanking hard on the scales; Ariane
makes all the right decisions because she's the heroine and therefore
of course she does. I was unsettled, in this year of 2021, by the
book's apparent message that her major failing is her unwillingness to
consolidate her power.

This isn't the only problem I had with this book. Before we get to the
political maneuvering, the plot takes a substantial digression into the
Hyperion Project.

The Hyperion Project showed up in the first book as part of the
backstory of one of the characters. I'll omit the details to avoid
spoilers, but in the story it functioned as an excuse to model a
character directly on E.E. "Doc" Smith characters. The details never
seemed that interesting, but as background it was easy to read past,
and the character in question was still moderately enjoyable.

Unfortunately, the author was more invested in this bit of background
than I was. Spheres of Influence introduces four more characters from
the same project, including Wu Kong, a cliched mash-up of numerous
different Monkey King stories who becomes a major viewpoint character.
(The decision to focus on a westernized, exoticized version of a
Chinese character didn't seem that wise to me.) One problem is that
Spoor clearly thinks Wu Kong is a more interesting character than I do,
but my biggest complaint is that introducing these new characters was
both unnecessary and pulled the story away from the pieces I was
interested in. I want to read more about the Arena and its politics,
alien technology, and awesome vistas, not about some significantly less
interesting historical human project devoted to bringing fictional
characters to life.

And that's the third problem with this book: not enough happens. Grand
Central Arena had a good half-dozen significant plot developments set
among some great sense-of-wonder exploration and alien first contact.
There are only two major plot events in Spheres of Influence, both are
dragged out with unnecessary description and posturing, and neither
show us much that's exciting or new. The exploration of the Arena
grinds nearly to a halt, postponing the one offered bit of deep
exploration for the third book. There are some satisfying twists and
turns in the bits of plot we do get, but nothing that justifies nearly
600 pages.

This is not a very good book, and huge step down from the first book of
the series. In its defense, it still offers the sort of optimistic
(and, to be honest, simplistic) adventure that I was looking for after
reading a book full of depressing politics. It's hard not to enjoy the
protagonists taking audacious risks, revealing hidden talents, and
winning surprising victories. But I wanted the version with more
exploration, more new sights, less authoritarian and militaristic
politics, and less insertion of fictional characters.

Also, yes, we know that one of the characters is an E.E. "Doc" Smith
character. Please give the cliched Smith dialogue tics a rest. All of
the "check to nine decimal places" phrases are hard enough to handle in
Smith's short and fast-moving books. They're agonizing in a slow-moving
book three times as long.

Not recommended, although I'm still invested enough in the setting that
I'll probably read the third book when I'm feeling in the mood for some
feel-good adventure. It appears to have the plot developments I was
hoping would be in this one.

Followed by Challenges of the Deeps.

Rating: 5 out of 10

Reviewed: 2021-02-14

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Russ Allbery (eagle at eyrie.org)             <https://www.eyrie.org/~eagle/>