ASH/HCC: Coherent Super Stories #35 - SPIRIT of the Lake

[Scott Eiler]

On 8/16/2014 11:38 PM, Dave Van Domelen wrote:

>       "Do you feel that?" Scout asked.
>       "Feel what?  I don't feel...oh, I read you.  Squad, Barnstormer
> protocol.  I repeat, Barnstormer protocol."  Hendrick resumed firing, this
> time aiming for the mouth as the beast curved into the sky over Lake Ontario.
> "Keep shooting," he muttered.

I enjoyed this team up, including its pathos and its highly developed 
protocols.  You've probably seen I love to "improve" stories, but I 
can't really touch this one.

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(signed) Scott Eiler  8{D> -------- http://www.eilertech.com/ ---------

When you *are* the leader... whatever goes wrong... whether you did it
or not... *you* are held responsible. - Barack Obama

I know. - Archie Andrews

- from Archie #617, March 2011, scripted by Alex Simmons.