MISC: One Day at a Time: The Chronicles of Mike Kittyman #19

[James Mason]

On Sep 2, 11:22 pm, Scott Eiler <sei... at eilertech.com> wrote:



> Informality and spontaneity are your strengths as a writer.
> Run with them.

Well I have been feeling very burble Lately. Though that's probably
because of the Wild blue yonder kicking my ass at living contests.

>
> But if you *would* like a bit of serious critique:  "you're" and
> "whether".  When you learn the right words, editors will like you more.
>

Yeah thats why I has an eatator.