REV: End of Month Reviews #75 - March 2010 [spoilers]
Andrew Perron
pwerdna at gmail.com
Sun May 2 16:10:40 PDT 2010
On Fri, 30 Apr 2010 22:24:05 +0000 (UTC), Saxon Brenton wrote:
> Looniverse Chronicles #1
> '264 BC: Extend The Olive Branch... of DOOM!'
> A Legion of Net.Heroes [LNH] series {high concept 7 contest}
> by Andrew Perron
> Right, administrivia first. Another HHC7 entry for the theme of
> 'Olympics'. Also, Andrew has created a new anthology series to showcase
> stories that take place in other than the present day LNH setting.
Yes! Note to everyone: this is the perfect opportunity to write Murder She
Wrote parodies.
> Now, on a meta level this works fine, because it provides Aphrodite
> Bilistiche the opportunity to showcase her powers to the reader. But
> within story it leads to accusations of... Bilistiche-dickery!
Woo! Yay for goofy story elements. <3
> All this instead of using those powers to distract the judges who have
> possession of the deadly olive branches while she either decontaminates
> them or replaces them entirely.
...you know, the thing is, I didn't even think of that option. It was
dickery from the word go!
> Now, lest the reader of this article miss the nuance that I am
> ranting in mock indignation, I will conclude with the recommendation
> that this is a perfectly readable story, done as a Golden Age style
> pastiche with lots of appropriate little touches, such as calling in
> her living statue friend Galatea to masquerade as her while she is busy.
Thanks! Though I think I aimed for Golden Age but hit Silver instead.
Andrew "NO .SIG MAN" "Juan" Perron, reading The Death of Cheesecake-Eater
Lad. You are insane.
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