LNH: Vel #17 -- Final Issue
Tom Russell
milos_parker at yahoo.com
Thu Jun 8 08:21:14 PDT 2006
Hmm. The final issue of Vel.
Generally, I think the final issue of a series should wrap things up.
And I guess this one does that, to the extent that any Willey story
wraps up, allowing of course for it being part of a crossover.
But the ending struck me as a bit unsatisfactory. It was more X-FACTOR
# 149 than, say, WATCHMEN # 12.
Granted, I'm not anyone to talk; the endings to my stories are often
shorter than the build-up, just as sudden, and not particularly
satisfactory. I have a lot of trouble with endings, and, to a certain
degree, beginnings.
I guess I'm alright at the middle. :-P
> Lad created by Tom Russell Jnr. and Dane Martin. aLLiterative Lass,
> Cheesecake Eater Lad and Ultimate Ninja created by wReam. Monark is
Actually, no: aLLiterative Lass is the creation of Charles Fitzgerald.
> public domain.
Where did this Monark first appear, incidentally? Because I've only
seen him in your stories, Jesse. :-)
--Tom
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