[NNTP] STARTTLS -- port 563 language

[Clive D.W. Feather]

Jeffrey M. Vinocur said:
> I just noticed that I had an outstanding change lying around on disk.  
> I don't remember if I reworded this in response to a specific issue, or 
> if it just struck me as a confusingly long and winding sentence.
> 
> Does anyone remember and/or think the revised text is an improvement?

It looks an improvement to me.

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